The Last Revision and Peer Feedback

1. For your last revision, please select one of your remaining drafts for instructor feedback:

• Celebrity Paper
• Picture Paper
• Exemplification Paper (music or language)
• Character Sketch

Post a brief reflection and introduction to the paper. What are your thoughts on it? What does the paper do well? What would you like feedback on? Give me 3 or 4 specific things to focus on as I review it so that you get the meaningful feedback you want.

Copy and paste the most recent draft of this paper below your reflection in italics, run a spell check, and publish the post.

2. Food Paper Peer Comments: Please see the revised copies of papers of others that worked in the same group that you did for the food paper. Read their revisions and leave comments.

Read through each author's revised introductions and also leave a comment to explain which one is your favorite and why.

Chips:

Tim L http://talportfolio.blogspot.com/
Jenna http://jmc121692.blogspot.com/
Megan http://mbuisman.blogspot.com/
Dan http://youcantseeme123.blogspot.com/
Garrett http://garrettwsportfolio.blogspot.com/
Tyler V http://tvl11portfolio.blogspot.com/
Marina R http://marinarportfolio.blogspot.com/
Samantha http://butireallyamhappy.blogspot.com/
Cassie http://cmpeek.blogspot.com/

Chocolate:

Caroline http://sugarlandd.blogspot.com/
Allie http://haltof.blogspot.com/
Dan H http://dancollegecomp.blogspot.com/
Andrew http://collegecompandrewbrown.blogspot.com/
Morgan http://morgansporfolio.blogspot.com/
Tim S http://collegcomp.blogspot.com/
Alex S http://alexanderschillaci.blogspot.com/
Taylor S http://taylorscolllegecomp.blogspot.com/
Tori-- http://tr-collegecomp.blogspot.com/


Cookies:
Grant http://grantcollegecomp.blogspot.com/
Tyler G http://tyler-bloggarific.blogspot.com/ (Tyler wins the award for the most creative URL)
Kate D http://kdcollegecomp.blogspot.com/
Eric http://edehondport.blogspot.com/
Fred http://fcrilly.blogspot.com/
Clara http://clarabblog.blogspot.com/
Kelsey http://kwynne3.blogspot.com/
Matt http://mattr-blogtastic.blogspot.com/ (okay...Matt and Tyler are now tied for best URL)
Taylor D http://taylordreste.blogspot.com/